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Burden

Striding behind those who carry The burden of those who passed Walking on bricks Carved of the deepest black With sand on either side Rocks jutting out from the ground Broken, harsh, and jagged Observing those with tears in their eyes The tears of great sorrow Seeing birds of death flying everywhere Birds of black, grey and white Names scattered all around Written with faded coal black ink On stained plaques of discolored white Those who carry must reach this place Where they drop their burden, Hide it, bury it, where no one can find But it will be found once again Not to be the burden of those who carry But the burden of those who passed This place of lethe and memory When the burdens are droped All forget where they were They joke and laugh They forget their tears of sorrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/18/2010 3:24:00 AM
Another excellent piece, Welcome to Poetry Soup...Raul
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Date: 1/16/2010 7:36:00 AM
Hi A.R., I want to first welcome you to Poetry Soup. We are all among friends here. What deeply moving poem this is. Very heartfelt and real. I was captivated from beginning to end. Great intospective and visual. Thanks so much for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your amazing poetry. Take care. Many blessings to you. Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:14:00 PM
Deep, introspective write, A.R. Welcome to the Soup! Here, you will be inspired as you too give inspiration to others! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/8/2010 10:39:00 AM
From one newbie to another...welcome, and I love the way you have written this! It is beautiful and thought provoking!
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Date: 1/8/2010 10:33:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup A.R. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/8/2010 6:23:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. may your stay be a long one.. and may your new year be filled with blessings.. luv.. creativeness.. friendships.. health.. and great poetry as this delight.. read "Soup-Sational" on my list of poems for more info about the Soup... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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