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Bundle of Joy

"BUNDLE OF JOY" blue eyes blink new life coos and goos speak from sweet mouth pink cheeks blush with warmth happiness for parents proud thanking God for cry so loud. *For Black-Eyed Susan's Tanks Contest *Oct. 3, 2012

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:55:00 AM

a sweet bundle... SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2012 2:29:00 AM

feeling giddy with your mood and laguagem sweet... BIG congrats..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/14/2012 4:17:00 AM

Big congrats from Spain xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/13/2012 10:07:00 PM

I can hear the baby's coos. well done Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2012 9:05:00 AM

WON 2ND PLACE .. THANKXXX

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 7:42:00 AM

Such A lovely Tanka here Linda!Congrats on your win!

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 10/12/2012 2:48:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:18:00 AM

yes, a very cute one. Congrats, Linda.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/11/2012 11:09:00 PM

Beautiful Linda, Many congrats on this win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/11/2012 10:41:00 PM

Did you have a new baby in the family? They do keep coming. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/11/2012 10:33:00 PM

beautiful poem about a new blessing, cute little baby...congratulations on your win :) hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/11/2012 6:43:00 PM

this is just lovely! congratulations on your win and on the new baby in your life!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2012 3:23:00 PM

Very nice pivote at the end of line 3 [by jove I think you've got it!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/11/2012 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2012 12:39:00 PM

A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Linda. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2012 10:04:00 PM

Linda, my bff, I'm not having trouble clicking here on the soup. I read the poem you entered in Nathan's contest. Did you write one for my contest too.. I did not see one for my contest... let me know ..xox~pd

Colleen Bono

Date: 10/5/2012 11:50:00 AM

hello.came back for a bit to post a couple new poems.take care

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/5/2012 5:39:00 AM

lovely this is, lucky boy to have you also....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 1:44:00 PM

very cute, Linda. I see you are basking again in the grandma status!! It's so fun to see those little babies in our lives!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/4/2012 9:34:00 AM

Awee... Linda my sweet bff... i love this tanka, i'm looking forward to my daughters new baby due around February... good luck in the contest..pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2012 9:15:00 AM

Yes, that cry means some strong lungs and most likely a healthy baby..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2012 6:58:00 AM

Wow, what a fully delightful and sentimental write this incredible poem is! I just love little babies, they are so cute and bring lots of joy! I know that you are the proudest grandmother Linda-Marie, and you should very well be, you deserve this my friend! This is a fantastic Tanka, I love this! I really enjoyed this great write this morning! Awesome piece, Great Work!!

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/4/2012 2:04:00 AM

I can feel the love you have to give.The sweetest of sweet...Grandparents you shall be.<3 (o:

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/4/2012 2:01:00 AM

This sure is a winner dear Linda. I absolutely love it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/4/2012 12:53:00 AM

our new baby boy has brought joy and happiness to all our lives and touched us in a special way .. so enjoy poets with luv as we smother him with kisses as only Grandparents can give ..