Budget Day

Lying in bed Streching limbs Slowly sinuously Gently Snow is falling Forecast is bad Budget Day is here Reality intervenes Anxiety filters in I get up stiffly To absorb it all

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Susan Mills

Date: 12/26/2010 1:46:00 PM

Wow what a creative write ti enliven a mundane and practical matter. Just did mine yesterday. Great write! And thanks! Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2010 7:39:00 PM

oh man, that dang budget day to ruin EVERYthing. I know just what this poem means. Great write. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2010 11:30:00 AM

Liz, if you look to the left side of page you will see contests. From there you click on Contests by Members that will bring up a page with all the contests going on by members. You then click on the enter contest on the contest you wish to enter . It will bring up your list of poems and you select the poem and enter it. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/9/2010 9:56:00 AM

On those days that are to be spent dealing with financial matters, I'd rather just lie in bed, Liz. Our styles are different, but we seem to think alike. Another poem to which I can relate! And thanks for your kind words on Guessing Games. I did have fun writing it! I'm surprised more people aren't entering John Heck's contest. He'd probably appreciate your support if you feel inspired to enter. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/9/2010 9:25:00 AM

Nice creative thought on the badget day, Liz