Bruise

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2014 12:17:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Kurt. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2014 11:48:00 AM

Kurt, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Awesome and amazing win :) Luv ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2014 8:57:00 AM

Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, kurt

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/28/2014 8:48:00 AM

Congrats Kurt on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/15/2012 6:47:00 PM

so few words, so much pain. Very effective, well done Kurt.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/15/2012 3:27:00 AM

I feel the pain in every line. Hope the healing has already come! Good write!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2012 5:42:00 PM

Kurt,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD

Terry O'Leary

Date: 12/11/2012 3:10:00 PM

Very interesting poem... you've really captured it... Terry

Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/11/2012 3:11:00 PM

PS Congrats on being featured...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2012 8:18:00 PM

Kurt, wow... that is what's wrong with me... ha ..love it. thank you for sharing :-) always~PD

Bradley Cox

Date: 8/24/2012 10:22:00 PM

Nice rhyme, thank's for sharing