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BRONZING OF TREES

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BRONZING OF TREES


Silhouette of trees dressed in chiffon prints
Oaks, pines, maples tossing  their hair
I trail along their rumba curve
way down to where glazed bushes nestle.
Above roasted sail of Laguna River
crossing a moat...today, foliage begins to seethe
on flamed leaves amidst summer’s  embrace,
as  more timber follow a  float
where mauve petals kiss the air.

The bronzing of glens and wheezing of mist
reach a coaled ember of summer fire,
cluster of moments drapes veined trunk
with sniff of earthy scent, reminding me
how lush the branches swell against heat
of August ‘s coals when two pairs of arms
brush the stars with paint of reveries.
Warm the meeting of palms fondling the barks
In a dizzy sketch of romance, and then,
Like a curl of ambrosial boughs in rumba dips,

Trees hold passion’s charade, until...



Charlotte Puddifoot's  Vibrant Verse 2 Contest
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  1. Date: 8/9/2014 11:54:00 AM
    This is just delightful ~ very creative ~ And I loved it. God bless you with inspirations to keep writing beautiful works like this one. Love and Hugs.

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 4:02:00 AM
    'Oaks, pines, maples tossing their hair'...'Warm the meeting of palms fondling the barks' etc. I could go on and on here...Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order here my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 10:59:00 PM
    Simply stunning Nette, congratulations. I just love your writing.

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 1:16:00 AM
    Nette galing galing!>. :) deLightdul wonderful images .. :) CONGRATULATIONS AND MABUHAY KA!!!.

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 7:43:00 PM
    Once again, Nette, a beautiful dance of words. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 6:39:00 PM
    This is magnificent, Nette. big congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 3:56:00 PM
    Nette, huge congratulations for your great well-deserved TOP win! Awesome imagery -just a beautiful write! Warmest regards! pandita

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 3:53:00 PM
    I really like the idea of branzing trees Nette, I might try it this fall, congrats on your #1 placement, Hurray!

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 3:48:00 PM
    A perfect winning piece...hugs

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 10:11:00 AM
    Few can paint such a gorgeous scene such as this, truly beautiful and shimmering with sheen! Love it !!

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 9:31:00 AM
    I love the images in the poem. Congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 7:13:00 AM
    Nette, I read this to the trees and they blushed. Great job.

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 6:52:00 AM
    Congratulations... Linda

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 5:05:00 AM
    Hi Nette! I stand in awe and bow to your incredible pen! I keep reading this beauty over and over again...and it goes to my favs. Yes, it is vibrant with richness of images and colours. I love it. // paul

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 4:55:00 AM
    nette, what can I say that I haven't said a hundred times before? I'll be accused of favouritism soon if I keep placing you first! incredible images, great manipulating and bending of language from first word to last...congrats on your top win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 7/31/2014 2:59:00 PM
    Stunning images penned, sweet friend!... Hugs, dear Nette.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/30/2014 4:05:00 PM
    What a great talent you are. this is incredible , and just stunning. A true piece of art. take care, Pete.

  1. Date: 7/30/2014 10:57:00 AM
    - Nette, the whole poem is: "a dizzy sketch of romance" - Beautiful! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/30/2014 3:03:00 AM
    Breathtaking imagery, and what a heady choice of words, wow! As always, you write awesome, Nettie!

  1. Date: 7/29/2014 11:41:00 PM
    Unique work here! Great imagery - like nothing I have seen before! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

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