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Broken Warrior

Has my futures fate become a victim of my evil past falling headlong in a spin,tward the day of my death what god has cursed me that i may suffer so I have fallen blind to my path and now I am almost alone in my suffering A large part of me wants to detach from this world,this slow death I was once held high in the house of the dragon and my spirit soared high with owls wings But now my wings are broken and I sit with my face to the earth and one lonely tear to nourish the ground then only to meet my maker then my taker.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/11/2008 6:06:00 AM
Mark, your poem reflects your pain. But God's there always. Just have faith, things will get better. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/11/2008 4:10:00 AM
Patrick is right Mark, you are probably going through a bad time right now, but guess what, you've come to the right place - a place where you can unload your troubled heart - and lighten your load in the form of words!!! Welcome Peace Fathima
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Date: 10/11/2008 2:58:00 AM
Mark... eat a cookie. It gets better.
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