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Broken Sky

Walking down
Death row
Looking up
Into the sky
When I can go
From this place
Called home
Something is wrong
The sky
Is broken into two
One side is black
The other side
Is white
I wonder why
The sky
Is broken into two
I look down
To see the faces
Of men who'll die
Before me
I look up
Back to see the sky
All one color now
Its black
Which means
Death day for me

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  1. Date: 12/7/2009 11:06:00 AM
    the imagery is perfect here. i hope you keep writing, i will keep reading! ------Ell

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 4:41:00 PM
    I wrote a new poem.It's called Life is to Short.check it out and tell me what you think.

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 3:31:00 PM
    How Sad, Prison industrial complex claimed another victim. Nice poem.