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Broken Promises

there is nothing that hurts more than broken promises it hurts deep into the quick sometimes its so bad that you really do get sick i keep thinking that things will change and my life for him i rearrange and i let my hopes fly but i find out soon enough that its still the same and all i can do is cry and call his name ive been hurt so many times i dont know how i,ll pull through but i get up dust myself off and then i think of you

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Date: 2/13/2011 7:27:00 PM
Once again, simple wording yields good descriptiveness and rhyming. However, it would be a good idea to change each "you" to "I" and "your" to "my". In this poem, it is your own feelings you are describing and not feelings of somebody else.
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