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Broken Electric

Electricity arcs up to the sky
Cracks off my head forcefully
Left imprint in my brain

She left me broken all at once one day
I slammed my head in a door
Wished I was dead, the pain

Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Well, which pain was worse the heart pain or the head pain?..I thought that was humorous don't know if you intended it to be...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifitng..Sara

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 9:42:00 AM
    One can only write of such when it is known first hand...extremely well done Russell!! you are pouring your passion into the pen well here!!! I love this!! Well Done!! big hugs, love ya much, deb

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 2:06:00 AM
    russell, this rakes me.. the images, the poetic imprints, the feelings all woven together to create such impact... clap, clap, dear friend!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:59:00 PM
    Powerful words with such an intense feeling, my friend! Great verse. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:16:00 PM
    Very interesting one, Russell. OUCH. what pain!!! Loved that last line.