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Broken Branch

Broken Branch
         by Amy Swanson, 2008

Winter-gray tree branch
       Hangs low, stricken by the storm
               Broken... but alive.

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  1. Date: 12/22/2008 8:02:00 PM
    Wow, the imagery is great in this one, I can't believe I've missed these beautiful haiku's...Raul

  1. Date: 12/11/2008 4:33:00 AM
    Wonderful haiku that stirs up strong feelings. I love the last line! Thank you again for your comments on my poetry! ~Juliane

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 5:35:00 PM
    Very nicely almost takes on a sad, note, as if it were a person, who is broken, yet still alive. Well done, Amy!~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 4:41:00 PM
    This is very good..I like broken- but alive..says quite a lot and not just about tree branches. Good work. BG