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Lord, I am calling you, can you not hear my small voice? The pages of my live are fluttering away, empty pages . . . and I am helpless to stop them. Can you not give me a sign? Something to grasp onto. Life is a stage, it is said and I am, on that stage alone, broken and lost. _______________________________ October 29, 2012 Poetry/Verse/broken Copyright Protected, ID 10-431-824-29 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Submitted to the Premier contest, Early October sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/4/2017 5:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Constance.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/3/2017 10:49:00 PM

Congratulations, BW on your win. There is a bright side of everything like the silver lining on broken clouds.

Gary Smith

Date: 10/3/2017 5:09:00 PM

Beautiful Broken Wings, congrats :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/3/2017 5:02:00 PM

An earnest prayer BW...Congrats on your win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2013 9:36:00 AM

Constance, a nice little win, in the SKAT' contest... xox~ Always & Forever *LINDA

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/9/2013 5:21:00 AM

Beautiful. Emotional. Well deserved win

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/7/2013 1:37:00 PM

I have prayed a prayer like this several times Constance...'broken and beautiful'...Perfect - Tim

Skat A

Date: 6/7/2013 12:47:00 PM

I sense what you brought from the heart, straight with deep and personal attitude. SKAT

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2012 2:50:00 PM

enjoyed reading this awesome write again - the last lines are so powerful

Jack Horne

Date: 11/4/2012 3:02:00 PM

so sad but so beautiful. I hope you are feeling better now, my friend

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/30/2012 1:01:00 AM

Constance this is so sad and endearing luv. Hope you are well.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 10/29/2012 9:07:00 PM

The heartache I hear, the beauty I see, the poetry I feel. Constance, the last line is my favourite, as it speaks to me on too many levels to mention is this tiny space. So glad you're on Soup, Dearheart, and that perhaps ... just a tad... its providing a small comfort... hope you are doing somewhat better. Your inspiration was never forgotten. Hugs, Cyndi

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2012 3:55:00 PM

A beautiful prayer for advice and help. - Very well written Constance - Hope you are doing well. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2012 3:46:00 PM

just saw this one come up. I love it, Constance. I think I am feeling this way too feeling so sad for hubbie, who has not found a new job yet. He may be forced to go back to that horrid company he was working for last month, since they said they would keep a spot for him if he wanted back. Is everything ok with you?

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/29/2012 3:07:00 PM

Talking about beautiful, this poem is certainly very beautiful my friend! I really enjoyed reading this vastly wondrous and harmonious write this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Annie Lander

Date: 10/29/2012 2:58:00 PM

Lord I am calling you can you not hear my small voice the pages of my live are fluttering away

Annie Lander
Date: 10/29/2012 3:02:00 PM

we need all the help we can get tonight.. the wrath of sandy..is upon us..