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I looked in the mirror today,
and I didn’t recognize my face.
It was so foreign to me.
Lines and curves,
I had never seen before.
Even though,
I had looked in this same mirror
hundreds of times before.
What I saw was,
a young girl,
whose eyes were swollen,
and red with tears.
Her face chubby and fat,
from all the times she ate,
to take away the pain.
I saw the blemishes on her face,
sporadically placed like polka dots,
caused from the stress and pain,
that was sporadically placed in her life.
I saw a frown,
that was permanently glued there.
So unwavering and fixed.
Mascara and make up smeared her face,
"dirtying" this picture,
she so carefully tried to paint.
A quick glance showed me all of this.
I  turn because I couldn’t bear to see more.
If it was like this on the outside,
what would the inside look like.
The thought,
quickly flooded my mind.
I had so many dreams,
all of them slowly drifting past.
So….
This is my life.
1:30 am standing,
standing in front of a mirror,
in the bathroom.
Tear stained face,
with running mascara stinging my eyes.
And writing …
always writing,
because there is no one there to listen to me,
except these pages. 
And if there were someone here to listen,
would  they even understand ?

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  1. Date: 2/15/2015 12:32:00 PM
    A tough courageous write. God Bless.

  1. Date: 2/15/2015 9:54:00 AM
    Rebecca :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~

    travis Avatar rebecca travis
    Date: 2/16/2015 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks ... i laugh because i normally check daily ont he site just to see whats new .. i didnt the day this made the hope page.. irony at its best .. thanks again !
  1. Date: 2/15/2015 5:21:00 AM
    So beautifully tragic. Hit me right in the heart

    travis Avatar rebecca travis
    Date: 2/16/2015 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks .. feel free to check outmy blog too .lots of new stuff and some crossover stuff :) thank you again.. http://3amwritingsinseattle.blogspot.com/2015/02/how-to-love-broken-girl.html
  1. Date: 2/13/2015 9:44:00 AM
    I read your poem this morning and I nearly cried. I know this is a bit straight forward and I don't know what has caused you to have these feelings but I do want you to know that someone is listening. At times, I myself feel like I don't recognize the face I see in the mirror.Do not feel like it's all over. I know you don't know me but your poem touched my heart. If you ever want to talk about anything my email is kearra915@gmail.com. Beautiful words keep writing girl!

    travis Avatar rebecca travis
    Date: 2/16/2015 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks ! and feel free to contact me as well or follow me from my blog .. some cross overstuff.. but s lot of new stuff too :) http://3amwritingsinseattle.blogspot.com/2015/02/how-to-love-broken-girl.html