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Brokeback Mountain

(The Movie) 

eyes dart with red
black, white and sepia hue
the horse slows behind

selfish cotton hide
lust, under the pale moonlight
rustic underwear

Hearts not meant to be
A mountain covered with dust
Orion's chap- stick

Plunging, campfire
Temptations broken wall
Cowboy makes his mark

by;PD

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/3/2016 8:19:00 AM

Brilliant combination of words. A deep & outstanding write. Enjoyed every line........hugs

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/16/2015 8:20:00 PM

Dear Linda Next I'm going to go through every poem I can to make what I did up to you my dear friend, wow this has alot of deep meaning to it but it's also a lot of fun with it's imagery, enjoyed the playfulness of it, cheri

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 7:02:00 PM

:) :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/4/2015 10:50:00 AM

Different in the colors of the underwear

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/25/2014 8:27:00 PM

make them fall into sentences...

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/25/2014 8:26:00 PM

Swirls your words...

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/25/2014 8:25:00 PM

Passion, It is I...

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/29/2014 6:19:00 PM

nicely done PD :) some great acting in that movie , maybe that's why he accidentally overdosed. in the movie "Little Man by Waynes Brothers " hey, this ain't no broke-back mountain" Hi Linda :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/14/2014 11:38:00 PM

yo. Those cowboys sure did make some big phat hot marks in that movie. Heard they were gonna change the name to : BackPACKIN All up in that Broke Back Mountain Fountain....just a rumor...wink>

Cherl Dunn

Date: 6/23/2014 7:41:00 PM

Well i never say the movie but this is a pretty cool write not bad at all, well expressed as always my dearest friend. sorry i rattled on about my hubby but i guess i just had to vent for a moment. how are you doing? hope you and yours are doing well and hope to hear from you soon, i have not sent out the post cards yet but don't worry i just got busy with tom and such i know you understand i will get them out soon don't worry. cheri

Cherl Dunn

Date: 6/23/2014 7:36:00 PM

Hey Linda sorry I've been a stranger but I had a lot going on lately. My hubby had a heart attack, and a stroke in the left eye, So we just him back home, and i was working a full schedule during the whole thing great manger of mine she had a lot of feeling for me on the factor that my old man is in the hospital, oh well it's home now that's all that matters right. I've been trying to keep up the best i can with the soup but well i tryed. i get some rewrites done though . cheri

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2014 12:44:00 AM

looking this one over again. I am a fan of that movie! Hope you are having a great weekend, PD. luv, andrea

Robin Davis

Date: 6/9/2014 11:33:00 PM

PD You captured the essense of this film in a creative and interesting way. Thank you for the nice comment on my Scary Moments poem.

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/6/2014 3:05:00 AM

Now if all movie synopes were THIS poetic, it'd all be fun to read. i believe films deserve this kind of scenic summaries. :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/22/2014 9:57:00 PM

you covered it well with the highlights that appealed to most viewers, PD. What a unique use of senryu to review a movie. Thanks too, by the way, for you recent comment on my Reshaping the Plea...I appreciate your generosity.

Gina Montalbo

Date: 4/22/2014 5:26:00 PM

good write felt it.... Gina

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/18/2014 8:22:00 PM

Sorry i have not been on lately but my little kitty got killed last week. I'd rather not talk to much about it to much, my heart is still hurting for her. So i needed to take a brake for a few days, i know you understand, i think that's why some of my stuff is so depressing. cheri

David Mohn

Date: 4/5/2014 9:59:00 AM

Hi Linda - This is actually one of my favorite movies and you mirrored the mood perfectly. I get entranced by the tragic love story genre

Dom- X-

Date: 4/3/2014 2:20:00 PM

LOL, no, no! I can't comment this poem. DX

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/2/2014 7:10:00 PM

Man, I Never Saw That Movie But I Heard A Bit About It Although And, We Do Believe In True Love Albeit Also Knowing That This Flesh Has A Mind As Agenda Of It's Own ? If In Truth It Be An Enmity Towards The 'Spirit' Then, Let Us Rise Above Of Love To Walk In It's Light This Clay That We Are For Again A Truth: We Are Not, `The Creator Nor His, Potter;` Yet, Amid This Vine And Nay Apart, We Are, What We Are....Walk In Love Shall We Dream As, 'The Children Of Light'....Love, Jeremy

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/1/2014 3:48:00 PM

"brokeback mountian" my cousins favorite joke. i remember the movie; it was the only real romantic movie that year. but don't tell anyone i said that. people talk.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/31/2014 7:35:00 AM

awesome Senryu friend PD. Just passing bye to say "have a blessed day always". cheers (^___^)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/28/2014 6:16:00 PM

I seen the title and had to stop :) Seen the movie a few times I still wonder is it real. You never really know who a person is even if you live with them, and still some just look the other way . Great poem :)