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Bringing Autumn (Trijan Refrain)

Come dance with me, my winged escape and skip the skies in flight we’ll let the wind lick at our nape and subtle touch invite. Our cares we’ll toss to milky moon and resonate our silky tune- our cares we’ll toss our cares we’ll toss in freedom’s name our love commune. Come float with me, my winged escape on billowed waves of blue we’ll lift the night mist’s heavy drape and sail on moonbeams through. This golden eve will whisper dreams on silver sheets where all it seems- this golden eve this golden eve cascades our love down rushing streams. Come bloom with me my winged escape in midnight’s breathless hour my petals spread ‘neath stardust cape to nature’s heady power. We’ll give ourselves to Spring’s last rites awaken sleeping appetites we’ll give ourselves we’ll give ourselves and Autumn’s zenith expedite. ~Trijian Refrain~ (a fabulous form by Jan Turner)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/24/2010 8:03:00 PM
(Kris, I think Time to Sew is one that is in the Prosies book) How was your day?
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Date: 9/8/2010 12:19:00 AM
You've got talent and it shows through all the forms choose to write with. There is a distinctive voice in your poems, no matter the form. Your poems seem polished, bro. Another great one.
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Date: 8/28/2010 9:44:00 AM
Wow, this is awesome! It sounds like a song and your imagery is so beautiful..I'm going to fav this:) Congrats on your poem being featured! Emily
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:35:00 AM
Kris, congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/25/2010 6:20:00 AM
So pleased to see this one featured. Congratulations ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kris. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:00:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem this week! well written and It is a fabulous form!! I will try one one day...:)
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:25:00 PM
A lovely tribute to Jan's form Kris. Congratulations on this poem being featured. Jan is a friend of mine so I sent her a copy of your poem and hope that is okay? Blessings, Connie
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:14:00 PM
Congrats Kris on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all... thankxxx for your sweet comments tonight.. with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:10:00 PM
I do like this interesting Trijian Refrain form, Kris. And you have me thinking about dancing happily into the autumn breezes. Do hate to give spring its last rites, though. It's such a beautiful season here. Excellent poem in style, form and content. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:54:00 PM
Kris, I am almost done here finally at Soup. haha. Gosh, you read at least four poems of mine.that was so nice of you , and I am sorry I have no more of yours I can see that are new. I will see you tomorrow on email. I need to get upstairs now. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:12:00 PM
AWESOME, Kris. And how nice that you give that great credit to Jan for this trijan refrain. I recognized right away that i was reading one and Jan will be so pleased when I tell her that you did this. It's great to see someone here who can emulate new forms on par with the creator of them! LUv, andrea ps. I am way behind on comments. May not be able to even respond to my emails TONIGHT. So sorry!
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Date: 8/20/2010 11:05:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Excellent flow with good descriptiveness and expressiveness..Excellent rhyme and rhythm..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2010 11:00:00 AM
This sure reads like a song, Kris-- what a romantic and wonderful write-- totally enjoyed this one!! Such a carefree poem that made me smile :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/20/2010 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Kris. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2010 9:25:00 AM
Oh wow! I love, love, love this so much. You're right, what a fabulous form. The changing syllable count works so well, the flow is just beautiful. This is almost like a lullaby, saying goodnight to the summer, but so romantic too. Really stunning poetry Kris ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:28:00 AM
I absolutely love this Kris, feel like floating after reading it.. :) Wilma
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:16:00 AM
WONDERFUL work..very beautiful..TAH
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