Brief Eclipse of Time

Life begins and ends Birth, joy, laugh, cry, death and dust Brief eclipse of time

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/1/2013 7:24:00 PM

So true. Life is just a blink of the eye on the universal time line. Great Haiku. It's getting very hard to find a poem of yours I have not read. If you find one please point it out to me. Love your work.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/23/2012 7:30:00 AM

Terry, you said so much in this gem :) enjoyed catching up this afternoon and thank you for your comments on my side! tc Wilma

Bradley Cox

Date: 8/22/2012 7:09:00 AM

Said alot with just a few word's shortbut powerful thank you for sharing

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/21/2012 12:13:00 PM

Wonderful philosophy, loved always, bl

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/18/2012 5:44:00 AM

so true! you've summed it all up in one haiku - very impressive!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2012 10:43:00 PM

just like the shooting stars, Terry. Very brief in the span of all time!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/17/2012 8:36:00 PM

Wonderful write, Terry, and how very true. Love, Kim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/17/2012 7:10:00 PM

Short way to say alot..good work. BG

David Williams

Date: 8/17/2012 3:34:00 PM

Terry, firstly the title drags you in, so well done on that, then the haiku makes you stop and think... whoa that's me! I like, David