Bridges To Nowhere and Between

It seems, I much prefer my dreams though times of consequence pass fleetingly. It seems, I know while in those very dreams of all that passes in between. Matching my realities to messages left within the ‘seems’ of fear and fantasy and light of the umbilicus cord which snaps when I’m affright. Yes, I’d say it often seems, I’m so a home when wrestling with my dreams. The I sees “I” , and oft compresses screams Munch-like in hues of blue and green on bridges to the nowhere and in-betweens, ear-covering, muffling, silent screams. Mesmerized, am I, by what can be, reality dissolves within the ever-after seams. Clocks melt, trees morph to faces, Dali emotes tattle-tailing signs that float on reels in rooms off kilter, windows bricked without. Can you hear me? Can I hear me, shout? I’m right here, I just asleep Please let me out!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/9/2013 7:22:00 PM
this is so surreal and it's really good, Debs. Glad I stopped by the list to catch some of the winners on it. You deserved a win. Congrats.
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:50:00 PM
Debbie ,a beautiful winning poem. Enjoyed reading every crossing bridge win. Hugs ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:01:00 AM
Ha love it congrats oh cool one xx
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:22:00 PM
Once I mastered the cadence of your verse this became a very enjoyable read. Talent created it and history will conserve it.... Congratulations ..... Jake
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Date: 11/6/2013 6:45:00 PM
DEBBIE , Congratulations on your Crossing That Bridge win.... always & forever :) LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2013 11:07:00 AM
finely crafted in a different poetic tone, debbie.. special cheers on your win..:) huggs
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Date: 11/18/2012 5:41:00 PM
Great write Debbie! My dreams are like movies, this sums up how bizarre they can be perfectly. Hugs
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Date: 11/17/2012 2:48:00 PM
Great verse Debbie.. I feel a song in this one.... hugs n luv Michael
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Date: 11/17/2012 1:29:00 PM
The other night I had a dream that I was lost in Russia of all places!...I had to get back home so I told myself 'Wake up!' and I did so...it was one of those 'Whew!' kind of dreams...Good one Deb! - Tim
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Date: 11/17/2012 10:19:00 AM
Debbie this sounds very real to me, we all fight some dreams, nice to read your work again...David
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