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Bridge To Oblivion

steadily walking toward stars of swirling light darkness all around

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/24/2011 6:28:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 9:29:00 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Brandee. Love, Carol

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/24/2011 7:06:00 AM

Nice contrast between the light and darkness! The gilded sky is a beacon to march forward into the dark night. Good luck in Rick's contest!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2011 1:56:00 PM

Hi Bran, how are you? I like the steady walk of cross over.. so xool.. and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.