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Bride of Satan

The bride of Satan dressed in white;
To be quite frank, she looks a fright -
But Satan says she looks all ‘rite’.

For Joann’s Wedding contest

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  1. Date: 9/3/2012 1:41:00 AM
    Many thoughts popped up when I read this. Just an aside: White is the color of mourning in the East & here (among certain tribes, it is red). I loved the pun on the word "rite": alright/'right/rite (as in in a church service). This surely is a macarbe take on a wedding Good luck in the contest. Su

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:09:00 AM
    :)) very funny. Yes Joann is sure to like it. The last one is such a punch line!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:21:00 PM
    reminds me of tim burton's movie, ' corpse bride'... but your stunning, humorous piece knocked me off my chair, jack... and satan said, 'alright?"... so funny!.. winning hugggs!..:)

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 4:42:00 PM
    The title itself scared me...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner in that it will probably be very unique...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 3:25:00 PM
    Very funny/witty! Like! Terry

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 2:54:00 PM
    Jack, does this word rite have a slang meaning or something? i am thinking there is a joke in there!

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 1:45:00 PM
    Ha! What a fabulous write my friend! I love this splendid poem Jack! You've done magnificently with this piece, Great Work!!