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Brick Whack In Dark Night

Brick Whack in Dark Night I woke up from my sleep with sudden shot, And instantly forgot my dreams to tell, Unconsciously my hand reached out for cell It knew where I had put it, ere I fell Into that June night sleep, too, too much hot To fall asleep. However, it could not Take hold of it. Quite desperate I got Up in my bed, and searched for hand fan. Well! I could not get it either. Oh, what Hell! I simply sat down at the edge of cot And felt the sweat-drops trickling at my back, And looked around in echoing dark, dark lot. It was quite dark and silent night. I think I had not seen more silent, darker night With gasp of silence all around up right I tried to find some fissure, crevice, chink Of outside light but could not. O alack! I could not get the reason of that whack.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/16/2016 11:23:00 PM
basit ali, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:59:00 PM
BASIT, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/4/2011 9:18:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Basit. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2011 12:08:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site ..check out our free contests too.. interesting write.. share words with luv ...
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