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Breathtaking Sunrise

Pacific murmur Blond eyelids wake up seagulls Happiness alive Surf and rays in love Paintbrushes escape from box Immortality... Tempera of Soul Obsessive Golden Spectrum Rip open my chest Don' t need oxygen Growing gills, play with dolphins Sun alive again... ***for P.D.'s Contest " Sunrise"***

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Matthew Anish

Date: 12/9/2011 9:54:00 PM

Nice collection of haiku here. I especially like - "Surf and rays in love" - good personification. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/8/2011 7:37:00 AM

Great visuals. Great write.

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/25/2011 12:38:00 PM

Do you live on the West Coast? I haven't been out there in years. Sounds like a soul - fufilling experience. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2011 2:15:00 PM

Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyed reading...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2011 11:59:00 PM

these are really cool. Congratulations. I sure have enjoyed the winners of this contest!!

John Freeman

Date: 11/18/2011 6:43:00 PM

Congrats Iolanda on your breathtaking sunrise. How have you been lady? Agape, Moses

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/18/2011 5:51:00 PM

congradulations in the contest. john

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:43:00 AM

Very nicely written Iolanda. Congratulations

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/18/2011 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations Iolanda on your placement with these great Haiku's. And thank you for reading my poetry. You ask why I have broken wings? A long story and a long journey. I am trying to write of it in my poetry.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:27:00 AM

IOLANDA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:26:00 AM

beautiful..Skat