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Breathing Room

No room to breathe 

Or catch one's breath

Words and phrases 

Once written on pages

Just as easily lost

A world without borders

No judge, no jury

Freedom with wings

To love oneself completely

Clinging to words bound

Caught within a dream

Reality just in reach

Coming up for air 

Before one drowns

Writing on pure emotion

True to style and form

Copyright © Shannon Deane

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  1. Date: 1/1/2012 6:03:00 PM
    You open up so many possibilities in this lovely verse. The world without borders would be perfection and sadly lives only in the heart of the poet.

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 1:05:00 PM
    this was awesome good job.. cory

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 12:49:00 PM
    * "I Love The Ending Unto This Beautiful Introspections Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * Viewing Its Reflections Thrice Times * No Time to Breathe * Coming Up for Air * Smiling As Tossing My Brush Unto The Floor * Gazing Upon The Canvas &, Wanting More * Beautiful & Thank You, for The Sweet Visit * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 12:27:00 PM
    Now this is a joy to read ... inside the soul of a poet... so enjoyed... luv Michael