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Breathe

I cannot breathe... What was that sound? The weight of your body lying on mine...breathe. This is a precious moment to behold for eternity. I see your eyes so close as to blend with mine. I try to lift myself longing for that kiss. Movement has left me.. lay back and perceive what is happening. He has taken my breath away.. My body is in shock. We walk the path through time...just breathe.. What was that sound? Something to be examined. His breath is giving me life. His eyes are giving me strength. We have entered the realm. I will not show the pain...breathe...

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Date: 5/19/2011 7:42:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Maggie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:07:00 PM
This is a stunning write, Maggie. I love the part where your eyes blend with his..I also see that u have written 200 poems! That is awesome! I have so much more to read then, don't I? Keep being a leader here. Gwendolen
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Danny Dyer
Date: 5/26/2011 2:25:00 PM
i remember the blending of eyes too

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