Breathe

Breathe, Though your heart is aching, Breathe, though your heart is breaking, Breathe. You're not the only one, To face what has been done, Breathe, though your heart is aching, Breathe. Though your heart is breaking, They all rely on you, To help to pull them through, Breathe, though your heart is aching, Breathe though your heart is breaking, Breathe.

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/6/2010 9:27:00 AM

strong peace here my friend

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/4/2010 7:29:00 PM

Hello Tanya, This is just lovely, so happy to see you here and share some of your work. Thank you As always, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 9:30:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tanya. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/31/2010 7:02:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today on P.S. ... hope u check out the contests offered to new members ..good luck with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/31/2010 6:18:00 AM

Nice lyrical write on breathe, Tanya

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2010 3:52:00 AM

I remember the song and the melody that goes with it.It is Smile though your heart is breaking..Good work to the rhythm of the song.I am glad that I chose this one to read today.Sweet Gum Trees have a round pod that is just a little larger than a table tennis ball..In the fall of the year they fall off onto the ground underneath the tree..If one steps on these pods, one foot will go one way and the other foot will stay and they will do a banana split..Very painful fall..I do surprise endings.SK