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Breakthrough

This heart beats to the rythm of a broken melody unsung, unheard. It tears through these walls of imprisonement that i created with tears that flowed, flooded and drowned me into my world of nothingness where only the echo of my fading voice drains my thoughts where feeling consume and describe me even i do not understand why I let this be why i let me be bound by this chain that has become a part of this being seeing is believing, they say but I am inviscible unseen, unknown striving to be recognized wanting to escape this torture of silence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/3/2011 11:52:00 AM
Thank you people for the shout outs. Though the poem was not based on something real :D
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Date: 2/4/2010 12:11:00 AM
Well, Pearl it pains when you know you have something to offer but obscurity making itself an obstacle. Great poem it is just keep it coming, soldier on one day it will be you living your dreams, visible to the whole world famous and very well recognised and your voice shall echoe eternally.
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Date: 2/3/2010 10:20:00 PM
Intresting Read. You are recognized!! :). Tumelo
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Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/3/2010 4:38:00 AM
Sad write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/3/2010 3:58:00 AM
I feel for you
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