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Break Away

I jump at every single chance,
To be one with alone,
A tremble that comes into dance,
In shallows that I own....
While grasping at each notion,
That's appearing in the air,
To rise in such slow motion,
That it glide's on my despair...
I become the very pieces,
That are breaking in between,
Which slowly start's releasing,
Who I am within a stream...
Lifting up the spirits,
That had wanted me to try,
Upon the broken pieces,
That they never thought could fly...
Then something starts decreasing,
As the bonds of my dismay,
Lighten all the pieces,
Till they finally break away...


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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:08:00 AM
    Terry, another wonderful poem that displays on the wanting and needs and grasping the love, as it flies... always~ LINDA

    Ledwell Avatar Terry Ledwell
    Date: 10/7/2012 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I never get a chance to reply to all the wonderful comments because im usually mobile but you have been by my page and gave me wonderful reviews I just wanted to say thank you I saw a few of yours and will read more, please check out my site PD, lemme know what you think :-)
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 7:08:00 AM
    enjoyed reading today....wish I could write more like this.

    Ledwell Avatar Terry Ledwell
    Date: 10/7/2012 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you