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Brave little Crab

Find me basking
In the moon
While I nurture my little ones
In our sheltered lagoon

I may seem hard on the outside
But please don’t mis-take
My shell is just a shield
For my inside, soft as cake

Yeah, I walk with a barrier
But believe me, I’m not dense
For one to know my true beauty
Must speak politely to commence

Romantically mysterious
Keen to tradition
Let me shine how much you’re valued
And illuminate intuition

Sentiment glows bright
In my crustacean eyes
If you’re close to my heart
I will hold you with ties

In cancerian claws you are safe
From the dangerous road that life paves
Etched in my heart you can see
“Defender of Love” engraved
Let me show you my stuff
In the land of the free, and home of the brave

Copyright © Miranda Lambert
Written: 6/21/11
For Nette Onclaud’s contest: Zodiac Zones

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  1. Date: 7/10/2011 8:11:00 AM
    Wandering, a great job, very pleased to see an honorable win for you in Nette's contest. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 7:42:00 AM
    Congrats Randa on your fantastic win in Nette's contest with this dynamic delight in zodiac zones luv.. crabs are great Mom was one and my grandson is one too..oh boy...

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 5:12:00 AM
    My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette, Randa

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 6:34:00 AM
    Excellent work..Telling of your personality by giving personification to the crab was a very creative touch..Enjoyed reading this morn..Reads like a winner to me.Good luck in the contest..Thanks for selecting my work to place in your contest..I am honored that you found it worthy..Sara

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 3:59:00 PM
    I love it Miranda, how creative and wonderful does it get, best of luck in nette's contest with this gem~~

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 11:38:00 AM
    I am cancer too but not a crab! A wonder ful write on an unusual subject......Elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 11:04:00 AM
    Interesting write. I'm a Cancerian too! Good luck in the contest! Regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 10:57:00 AM
    Very good, Miranda. Thrice I started writing an entry and thrice I binned it. Too difficult for me. This one is a shiner. Good luck in Nette's contest. :-)

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 10:56:00 AM
    BEAUTIFUL its funny i just started writing and to say the things i say in my poetry i would never say to anyone i guess that's what it is all about putting your heart and true feelings into words and i see that in you poems thank you for the inspiration to write and your for awesome work