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Expelling a sigh
the scent of your breath distills
a vapor of love

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  1. Date: 5/5/2015 7:43:00 PM
    [the clean mint/ scent of your breath/ I sigh] senryu- since we know a sigh is expelled air there is no need for the word expelled - love has no smell & to be a haiku it must be objective! BUT to be a senryu it need not be - it can be subjective- so the first decision you should make is whether you can give up most of your opinions and write of sensory FACT which evokes emotion [then you write haiku]OR this is about your opinion then its senryu you want. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 6:36:00 PM
    Wow....Ralph; so much sensuality spoken without the need for excess words. Beautiful :) ...though I like whatever 'breath' Disarrono falls in ;)

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:14:00 AM
    love the imagery... deep... Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:09:00 PM
    Ok very different type of write. I'm glad you enjoyed my booth my friend. cheri

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:03:00 PM
    Excellent, I love the smell of Brandy. Great Haiku. I admire this form of poetry, sadly I'm useless at it, but get great pleasure reading other poets work. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Thank you Skat and Anne Lisa. I am a brandy lover with a good Cuban cigar

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 5:41:00 AM
    - Sweet words of love in a haiku poem, Ralph.- Enjoyed it !! - Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Hello Ralph, wow.... That's one purified feeling Brandy leaves behind... Wonderful haiku..... Love ~SKAT~