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brakes screech

brakes screech -- a large ginger cat runs across a road

for Constance's monoku contest, 15th December

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  1. Date: 3/15/2014 10:09:00 AM
    Jack, .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 6:53:00 AM
    halt...say no more...this is a winner!

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 1:08:00 AM
    You brake for redheads.. Nice line and win Jack!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:37:00 PM
    a piece of reality here, spot on form, full of impact (literally!) but I hope the poor 'puddi' cat escaped! congrats on your 1st place win :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:04:00 PM
    Eight more lives to go. I enjoyed this winning piece Jack. Congrats.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:00:00 PM
    Y'ayyyy it's my chum Jack again on another winners' list. BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:42:00 PM
    - One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:18:00 PM
    Wow!!! Way to go ..SK

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:57:00 PM
    Oh........this is so true to life.. well done, Jack !! A pleasure to share a placement with you! Congrats to you!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging but as you know I have been having some eyesight problems, Constance

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:03:00 PM
    Jack this is excellent enjoyed reading it Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 5:44:00 AM
    Reads like a winner..Sara

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:24:00 PM
    A quick and brilliant write here, such a wonderful Monoku my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely poem this evening! You have mastered the Monoku in my mind! What a delightful thought, you saved the cat from dying Jack! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:24:00 PM
    hey, now THIS Is quite the vivid image, my friend. Glad you didn't make it black like my beloved Razzmatazz!!!