Boy Bitten By a Crayfish

Boy Bitten By a Crayfish



When women seen with no powers to create

Vessel to feed male seed for generations

She could make images live and update

Both of procreation and creation.



Once drew a painting of a laughing girl

Sent to Michelangelo to review

Quickly returned the painting with a hurl

Draw on the subject of crying child anew.



She painted “Boy bitten by a crayfish”

Tear-eyed brother weeping over the cut

The sister trying much hard to appease

And make peace with great master’s guts.



This feat, noticed by artists of her time

Was placed with “Cleopatra” in prime.

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 Fifth place win
in Cindy's contest

** I was inspired to write this poem by her painting BOY BITTEN BY CRAYFISH, one of her earlier painting**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/5/2014 6:37:00 PM
Congrats dr. ram, this is a fine piece of writing!!
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Date: 2/5/2014 1:35:00 PM
you caught me with your intriguing lines, dr.ram.. congrats, congrats!..
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Date: 2/5/2014 12:21:00 PM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:17:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Dr Ram
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:55:00 AM
Congrats Dr.
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations, a fine piece of writing.
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:10:00 PM
Dr. Ram Mehta, how sad it is to get hurt, lovely way to capture events--poems and paintings. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 10/28/2013 6:03:00 PM
This was interesting......good job
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:36:00 AM
Doctor, I see that you, too know a bit about creativity.... Nicely done, my friend, very nicely done...... Jake
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Date: 10/27/2013 4:23:00 PM
Beautiful fact accompanied with Queen's picture, I think. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/27/2013 3:34:00 PM
Great inspiration. It made a fantastic poem. Thanks for sharing such professional work. It's worth rereading again and again. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:07:00 PM
interesting write, Dr Ram
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