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Bottomless Pit

The pain subsided
as I lifted the drink
space still resided
deeper I still sink

Need a love to take up space
to fill that empty hole
a need to leave this place
to empty my poor soul

Waiting for some sun
to chase my rain
for that I am not the one
only I am to blame

A long game of chess
my life seems to be
lost all my pieces and caused a mess
as you can definately see

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  1. Date: 4/9/2011 10:43:00 PM
    there is so much sadness in your poetry, you release all of it in your writing, but you do write with passion and how you feel. and i do enjoy reading it.