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bottled message

I hear a voice
whispering gently
bring me home

standing on sands
of time
leaving a footprint
upon the soul
holding hands out
in kissing dreams

My fingers reach out
passing yours
a touch softly

sailing an ocean
flowing to you
paradise island
chambers reserved
in a dream

My breath trembles
anticipating inhale
exhale escalating

once kissed
the soul
becomes real
a dazzling treasure
held in chambers
forever more

A little nightingale
flew out 
my heart window
resting in yours

Copyright © liam mcdaid

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  1. Date: 11/23/2013 12:40:00 AM
    This is an amazing romantic write...Bravo Liam....peter

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:38:00 AM
    Deadly romantic. What the hell do you drink over there. Give me some of that.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Ahhh!! Enjoyed the romantic and passionate work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 2:17:00 AM
    - Always enjoyable to read your beautiful poem, Liam - Thanks for posting! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:15:00 PM
    It doesn't get much more romantic than this! Your words flow so softly and effortlessly here, almost as if you write in whispers. A beautiful, beautiful piece of poetry, Liam!

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 4:54:00 PM
    a little nightingale flew out my heart window restimg in yours.You are the prince of romantic verse..awesome!!!