Notes About The Poem

~ my heart is in this piece ~

FYI - 'nam myoho renge kyo' is a chant expressing determination to embrace
and manifest our Buddha nature (Tina Turner was a devout practitioner)

Borrowed Bits of Spirituality

Listen to poem:
Nam Myoho Renge Kyo
The chant of purity
The cleansing my soul
The freeing my heart

Nam Myoho Renge Kyo
I light a candle for an offering
And bow my head in prayer

Nam Myoho Renge Kyo
I strike another match
Light the stick of incense in my hand
And take one deep breath

Nam Myoho Renge Kyo
Most often though I prefer to burn some sage
And imitate my native ancestors
By cleansing body heart and soul

Nam Myoho Renge Kyo
Life is at its utmost best
When I close my eyes and hover
Midway between heaven and earth
Leaving behind a mundane world

Nam Myoho Renge Kyo
The final words I want to utter
As life departs my lips



AP: 1st place 2025, 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2023, Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on  April 23, 2020 for contest A POEM HONORING SPIRITUALITY sponsored by CAREN KRUTSINGER  -  RANKED 1ST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/7/2020 3:47:00 PM
A Buddhist phrase is such a powerful notion and it expresses the breadth of your spirituality. Thank you for professing it so in this poem, lovely as it is. Well deserved high placement. Honored to be along side you on this one.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2020 8:11:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Greg.
Date: 5/7/2020 12:30:00 PM
Congrats Line on your win--curious what language the phrase is in--Thai maybe?
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2020 8:13:00 PM
Nam Myoho Renge Kyo is a phrase generally attributed to a 13th century Japanese Buddhist monk called Nichiren.
Date: 5/7/2020 10:08:00 AM
Line, thank you for giving us this insight into your spiritual nature. Very peaceful and meditative. Cleansing of soul and freeing of heart. Beautiful.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2020 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/27/2018 12:09:00 PM
Wow! Powerful! Shades of Hamlet, chancing upon his father-in-law in prayer, so he could not kill him then,...or the ten martyrs of the Roman destruction of Israel/The Holy Temple, who went to their deaths with "Sh'ma Yisroel" on their lips: Hear, O Israel, The Lord Our God, The Lord is One. Ommmmmmmm, from Alan Ginsberg. Bravo, Line! :) Gershon
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 2/27/2018 6:48:00 PM
O Gershon, you crack me up. Yes this is exactly what I had in mind when I wrote this poem. LOL! Thank you for your wonderful visit and comment.
Date: 2/27/2018 6:25:00 AM
I’ve experienced the hovering in prayer, once! I’m a Christian. Your poem is lovely, dear Line!
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 2/27/2018 7:09:00 AM
I read where God was compared to a mountain and religions were different sides or paths. I never hurts to go on hiking trips.
Date: 2/26/2018 10:55:00 PM
Wow Line that was absolutely incredible!! Another Amazing poem of yours!! Words so deep and expressive.. Enjoyed reading!!
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 2/26/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robertina. I love that we are so in tune. Line xx
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter