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Booze Blues

I don't know what people are thinking,

when they are planning,

on going out and drinking,

cause the very next day,

they wake up late,

leave the house in a panic state,

their skin looking a little green,

and all of a sudden they go from nice,

to mean,

they say that their stomach feels sour,

that's cause they shoulda took a shower,

they say they had a blast,

but can't figure out why,

their arms in a cast,

to me,

this does not sound very fun,

and that's why my days of drinking,

are done......

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  1. Date: 10/23/2010 11:16:00 AM
    Nice write loving it here my friend

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 9:23:00 AM
    so true to your words here love it duncan

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 11:20:00 AM
    Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Susan. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 5:28:00 AM
    You have penned well the after effects of drinking, susan