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Bold Gypsy Humbled

On full moon night, wild tresses float like flowers as stars ignite her arms to dance, then to pull her gypsy robe, arise tambourine hours ; the wake of feet romancing tunes from sky’s drool. Bold magic only her distinct kismet whips Yet she, humbled by thief lover’s captured kiss, unveils the inner tramp panting without reign. By dawn, a Jezebel turns into maid chained! ©rispetto using two rhyming quatrains abab ccdd with 11-syllable lines ......... For Lisa Cooper’s Gyspy, Tramps and Thieves 14 may 12

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Date: 7/21/2015 8:39:00 PM
Wow, this was entrancing, Such descriptive and intense lines like -romancing tunes from sky's drool- and a jezebel turns into maid chained!- This was inspiring, glad I read it! ;)
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Date: 5/28/2012 4:03:00 PM
ah, yes I remember this one. BIG congrats. Yours had the wonderful Nette imagery in it!!
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:53:00 PM
Nette, one more one, more...,, Congratulations in, Lisa's contest. It's been sweet reading many of the winners out here this week.. Take care~ PD
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on another well deserved win Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 1:45:00 AM
Nette congrats on your 1st place win, super..David
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Date: 5/23/2012 4:06:00 PM
Passionate rispetto poetry....terrific work! Congratulations Nette!
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Date: 5/23/2012 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations of your winning poem.
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Date: 5/15/2012 8:40:00 PM
A great way to do this challenge. What an interesting image, sky's drool! Do you know that song: The lady is a tramp!! Like that!
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Date: 5/15/2012 1:24:00 AM
Oooh, what a fantastic write my friend! I was so enthralled I read this poem again and again! Thank you for writing this fine write! I will cherish the words forever Nette! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:05:00 PM
I have not been able to get a thought on this one but you have captured it very well..Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like a winner..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by..Glad that you liked my work "Deja'vu"..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2012 12:11:00 PM
Wow...this is amazing Nette.Just love the imagery very much.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:31:00 AM
OMG This is absolutely amazing.... going to my favorites :)
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