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blue mind

Colors came to me early this morning,
Messed up together they asked me for a kiss,
I thought they’re strange and ignored them
Woke up and lived my day.
Colors came after me all day along,
Smiling and messing with my hair,
The wind was their home,
The rain took their part,
I still ignored and loved, and hated, 
They’re not there if I don’t think about them.
Then, in a flash I found the reason,
They’re coming after me so badly,
So I picked up the blue, kissed them all one by one,
As they formed a rainbow I walked away,
With my sad, blue mind.

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  1. Date: 7/28/2009 4:37:00 AM
    Delightful read Mirela, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James

  1. Date: 6/30/2009 5:28:00 AM
    wow! i think this is the most original poem i've read in a really long time. nice job and welcome to the sope, with a side dish of warm hugs. love, Stephanie

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 11:09:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Mirela. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 8:10:00 PM
    the title was what drew me in on this one and it was a great poem to match! well done!!...luke

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 10:22:00 AM
    welcome to the soup! Mirela! love the personification of colors, and their need for you to be blessed to become a rainbow, with blue still w/you! nice effect! jimbo

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 8:47:00 AM
    Sad blue mind creating rainbows, wow - kool write Mirela & a warm welcome to the soup>>James