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Blue

While looking back, I think of this… and cannot understand How strange the fact, that something owned by someone grand, a china cup, so delicate, and brought here from another land, blue and dainty in my hand, would last beyond the grave...intact Although my dear, enchanting friend, more fragile than a tiny cup,... her life would have to end ~ A river of blue washed over my morning's mood... Sorting through her things carefully wrapped in tissue, I found her blue-willow cup
_5/10/13_______________________________________________________ Originally for A Free Verse plus Tanka Challenge describing "blue"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/7/2016 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie....Linda
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:54:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/1/2016 10:53:00 AM
Wonderful poem Carrie, so sweet and touching.
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Date: 3/1/2016 5:15:00 AM
Number one in my book. Carrie. Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2013 1:52:00 PM
soupmail.
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Date: 5/23/2013 11:33:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well-deserved grand win my dear friend, Carrie! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/22/2013 7:11:00 AM
Wow Carrie you've outdone yourself with this. Many congrats darling!
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Date: 5/21/2013 4:44:00 PM
Brilliant!
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Date: 5/21/2013 4:15:00 PM
when I first read this I mentally noted it as a top winner, sheer perfection...congrats on a deserved 1st place :)
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Date: 5/21/2013 10:52:00 AM
memorable work of art, carrie... congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your great win. Betty
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:34:00 AM
Sniff....congratulations..
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Date: 5/21/2013 8:50:00 AM
lovely imagery Carrie, congrats on your well deserved first place win
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Date: 5/21/2013 7:36:00 AM
Ahh!!Great work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/21/2013 7:01:00 AM
this is beautiful. I'm glad I happened upon this piec of blue emotion. fav.
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Date: 5/21/2013 6:58:00 AM
River flows in words. Carrie a very fine Haiku. A big congratulations on your win. A well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/21/2013 5:18:00 AM
Warm and quietly lovely. Congratulations, Carrie. Well won.-Red
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:06:00 AM
Many congratulations on your top spot Carrie, well done xx
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Date: 5/21/2013 12:40:00 AM
what can I say? For me, this is premier Tanka writing!!! Congrats, CArrie.
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:56:00 PM
awesome Carrie... congrats in Andrea's contest... Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:00:00 PM
No question that this is the winner...just lovely. congrats. BG
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win an excellent poem.
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Date: 5/11/2013 4:40:00 PM
Carrie this is an excellent Tanka. I love it. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/11/2013 12:40:00 AM
Awesome dear sweet Carrie
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