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Hey everyone, I'm 16 and this is my first poem that i've ever posted. I would like to know your thoughts, and thank you for your time! The night is dark and silent The thoughts come rolling in And hour after hour I wonder where you've been If you ever think of me In this deep dark night? As when the moon above us shines It's possible that you might At one point we were one So long ago it seems a crime But our bond is of a love One that will outlast time If I ever saw you again I'd ask how you've been keeping? All I'd need is just one look Our time all too fleeting To say that I don't miss you Would be an outright lie Without you I am lost I'm barely getting by I wonder where you are When we're so far apart You're already gone But never from my heart I can't ever let it out Or the sadness will grow So until we meet again It's best you don't know So it's at night in the darkness Where I think of you And the night isn't black But a dark shade of blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/31/2016 6:40:00 AM
Awesome poem. Skat
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Date: 9/15/2013 5:47:00 AM
i seen this ,and felt this ,it powerful lot of longing passion to want and understand thank you for sharing this wonderful piece
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Date: 2/12/2013 2:22:00 PM
Thanks James :)
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Date: 2/12/2013 12:15:00 AM
Hey Juliet, i took some time to read your art and i must say i'm astonished by your work. I write a little less like you, but i must say you write better. Welcome to Poetrysoup. James.
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Date: 2/4/2013 3:18:00 PM
Thank You Kenisha!
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Date: 2/4/2013 6:55:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup.enjoyed reading your poem.have a great day.
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