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Pit of hell feelings With despair and inner pain Mounting and growing As sadness becomes my food My only true sustenance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 2:08:00 PM
Wow, incredible depth of emotion here, Well done and congrats Joe
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Brandee. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest. This was one I did not read until the results - I like the "blue" theme of your poem.....Thanks on the comment......George
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:16:00 AM
Wonderful Tanka!Congrats Brandee on your well deserved win in this contest!--kashinath
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:44:00 AM
Congrats Brandee on your super win in the blue contest with this awesome entry luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:17:00 PM
Brandee, a big congratulations to you on the winners' list. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2011 7:51:00 PM
A truly sad picture. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/10/2011 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in Francine's contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/10/2011 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations Brandee on your poem's honored placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Blue" Contest, Brandee. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:52:00 PM
So much depth and emotion in 5 lines, just awesome and congrats on your win~~
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Date: 2/10/2011 12:16:00 PM
When the pain is unsurmountable, it does seem like we live on sadness, Brandee. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2011 12:10:00 PM
Very good! - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:10:00 AM
Hello Brandee, Congratulations on your win. Well done! As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:52:00 AM
coming back here, Brandee-- congrats on your win with this moving piece-- :)
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:28:00 AM
congrats on placing 10th in the contest Brandee with this very deep entry
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Date: 2/10/2011 9:54:00 AM
Never thought of it that way, of sadness being sustenance-- yet another different perspective on the word blue-- wish you the best in the contest, Brandee :)
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:55:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great desciption of sadness..Sara
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:24:00 PM
Interesting write on the blue feelings of sadness, Brandee
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Date: 2/9/2011 2:20:00 PM
I agree with everything Andrea says.
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Date: 2/9/2011 2:12:00 PM
very good way to paint the feeling, Brandee!
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