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Below is the poem entitled Blue which was written by poet Debbie Balonon. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A mirage of everything
You wished to hide from you.
The daunting throbs of
pain breaks into every mesh
of guilt and delusion that you 
have built around you.

You must be silent.

The mystery that exists
Yet dies
with every uttered sigh of 
The hidden breaks free
Yet unanswered.

You must still be silent.

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  1. Date: 2/4/2011 1:44:00 PM
    This is not bad for a first entry. Welcome to the site. I hope there's more quality work we can see from you in the near future.

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 6:07:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing .. check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 12:43:00 PM
    Very expressive and interesting write on Blue, Debbie