Blood Bank

A.W. Nutter

My breath suspended in the air
The forest adorned with frost
Fleeing from the Devils lair
Carrying a soul already lost

Wandering in a maze of emotions
I hear their strained voices calling
Pleas of concern an artful allusion
Must remain hidden until morning

Gazing upon my open wounds
The scent of blood, I’m betrayed
Captured, sent back to my tomb
A favorite slave quickly reclaimed

My ankles and wrists firmly secured
Cleaned and prepared for the feast
Thirteen souls the master’s acquired
Placed in line, awaiting the beast

A single finger points in my direction
Two pints of blood quickly devoured
Dracula feeding during his resurrection
His thirst for life temporarily acquired

Never again will I escape the master
In Dracula’s manor is where I dwell
Private stock, providing blood forever
Condemned to exist in this living hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/16/2013 2:17:00 PM
Awaiting the beast! Beastly but well crafted.
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Date: 2/12/2011 3:38:00 PM
Grotesque, but fun reading. This is a great poem for Halloween.
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Date: 1/31/2011 3:53:00 PM
ripe and grizzly, I wrote a dark one for you read Raven's Plight....[watch out for your eyes!] Light & Love {and if you could give me a limerick for the contest I'd be eternally greatfull?}
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Date: 11/19/2010 7:08:00 AM
And while you are there kick some butts ... Let the body parts fly like words everywhere, we wait to eat the flesh of beauty.
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Date: 10/24/2010 5:18:00 PM
Now I'm upset I need more
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Date: 10/22/2010 7:12:00 PM
what a gripping and chilling write, Anthony-- really enjoy how you tell your tales-- very cleverly written! -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/11/2010 8:36:00 PM
Anthony you are amazing. If I were a girl I would. But I'm not. Excellent write my good friend
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Date: 10/11/2010 6:28:00 PM
yikers! Anthony, strong souls set aside! What a curse to have such a gift,, I love the way you feed your poetry with the real dark and twist of a mind. Enjoyed your bank of bloody hell,.p.d.
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Date: 10/10/2010 2:02:00 PM
as always your words are thrilling and wonderful. always a pleasure to read, glad am i to have stopped by your page today. thanks for this :). take care --madison
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:40:00 AM
A very suspenseful and somewhat chilling poem about the acquisition of lost souls. Great poem for halloween, Anthony, and I think this will do very well in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:27:00 AM
shivers GREAT WRITE !!!! sarah x
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:50:00 AM
Wow, this one gave me goosebumps !!
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:02:00 PM
Clever title too!
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:01:00 PM
Geee, Anthony, you rarely hear the slaves of vampires "speak" ARe you a fan of True blood by chance? I enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/7/2010 5:15:00 PM
Wow!Best poem ive read today.So abstract an dark.I love the last stanza.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 10/7/2010 4:09:00 AM
Dam Dude, you good. one criticism change your surname, I'm the mad one here lol just kidding :-)
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:32:00 PM
Well, humans don't live forever so maybe death will end such a living hell...Interesting scary Halloween write..Sara
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