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Blink

Time
Sped by
Quick moving
Continuous
Eye gave blink it was past forevermore




Entry  for P.D's  Any Poem this week Contest.
Written by Carol Brown
2nd Place Winner

timetetractys

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Sakthee Ravichandran

Date: 6/23/2012 10:24:00 PM

EXCELLENT POEM I READ IN THIS MORNING SAKTHEEE S RAVICHANDRAN

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/10/2012 6:36:00 AM

ooh how did I miss this gem? It's so profound! congrats on your win :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 2/27/2012 2:41:00 AM

Your Avatar PIC REALLY CAUGHT MY EYE CAROL! WOW! MY father is a photographer and when my son was young he took a pic that looks almost identical to that pic you have! Anyways the picture ended up winning a bunch of awards and some money and prizes! This is too funny! Btw, I dig the poem too!

Fabiyas M V

Date: 2/25/2012 9:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win,Carol

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/25/2012 12:29:00 PM

Whoosh time flies...loved how you ended with the last line.. Congrats on your superb win, Carol, nice weekend...huggs

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/25/2012 9:31:00 AM

Wonderful expression of blink enjoyed, here few words are enough to say in depth. Congrats on your superb win. Loved and wish you all the best always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2012 9:51:00 PM

loved it the first time, CArol. Big congrats in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2012 9:21:00 AM

congrats Carol on a super second place win for another exciting set of glorious words from your gifted pen luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2012 6:19:00 AM

Just a word of thank you to everyone. Thank you for the placement P.D.... What an honor to be included on the winner's list with such talented poets. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/23/2012 4:01:00 AM

Great concept for a tetractys, Carol...powerful yet brief! ps...I've been wanting to tell u how cute that Avatar is...what a cutie patootie! Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 2/23/2012 2:32:00 AM

Carol,congrats on your win with this beautiful Tetractys.Enjoyed.

Don Johnson

Date: 2/23/2012 1:50:00 AM

i second blink an time had passed, big bang surely was a blast... onetime...past

Don Johnson
Date: 2/23/2012 2:55:00 PM

sometimes though we never think, it happens in a wink, and its gone time...instinct, between the rhymes....

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/22/2012 11:23:00 PM

Carol, we poets know you can say a lot with just a few words and you've proven it here. Well done and congrats on making PD's winners' list..............S.Ronthorpe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/22/2012 10:25:00 PM

CAROL.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/22/2012 10:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Carol.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/22/2012 2:49:00 PM

A few words, but collectively, they say a lot.

Erich Goller

Date: 2/22/2012 12:26:00 PM

Time seems to move faster than a blink nice expressed poem.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/22/2012 10:58:00 AM

Tempus fugit! What you have written is so true. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Judy Ball

Date: 2/22/2012 4:09:00 AM

Nicely said Carol. Reminds me of an old song. "TURN AROUND, TURN AROUND, TURN AROUND AND YOUR TWO, TURN AROUND AND YOUR FOUR, TURN AROUND AND YOUR A YOUNG GIRL GOING OUT OF THE DOOR." Great write. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2012 7:02:00 PM

yep, life is in a blink of an eye, just like this, Carol!! Good one.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/21/2012 4:27:00 PM

That's a great poem Carol! I love how you build up the entire write then in the last line, bam, it "...was past forevermore"! That is a fantastic line there at the end! I enjoyed your poem very much this evening my friend! Awesome Work!!