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Sped by
Quick moving
Eye gave blink it was past forevermore

Entry  for P.D's  Any Poem this week Contest.
Written by Carol Brown
2nd Place Winner

Copyright © Carol Sunshine Brown

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  1. Date: 1/19/2015 4:36:00 PM
    Almost didn't see this one.. Clever enjoyabe write. G & D

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 10:24:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 6:36:00 AM
    ooh how did I miss this gem? It's so profound! congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 2:41:00 AM
    Your Avatar PIC REALLY CAUGHT MY EYE CAROL! WOW! MY father is a photographer and when my son was young he took a pic that looks almost identical to that pic you have! Anyways the picture ended up winning a bunch of awards and some money and prizes! This is too funny! Btw, I dig the poem too!

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:42:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win,Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 12:29:00 PM
    Whoosh time flies...loved how you ended with the last line.. Congrats on your superb win, Carol, nice weekend...huggs

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:31:00 AM
    Wonderful expression of blink enjoyed, here few words are enough to say in depth. Congrats on your superb win. Loved and wish you all the best always, bl

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 9:51:00 PM
    loved it the first time, CArol. Big congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 9:21:00 AM
    congrats Carol on a super second place win for another exciting set of glorious words from your gifted pen luv..

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 6:19:00 AM
    Just a word of thank you to everyone. Thank you for the placement P.D.... What an honor to be included on the winner's list with such talented poets. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 6:09:00 AM
    Congratulations for a fine contest win and thank you for your comments. Sorry for generic response but I’ll be home this weekend. I like to read every poem I can for individual comments. Love you guys…..Craig

    Brown Avatar Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 2/23/2012 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nothing to be sorry for Craig. Thank you for your comment. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 2/23/2012 4:01:00 AM
    Great concept for a tetractys, Carol...powerful yet brief! ps...I've been wanting to tell u how cute that Avatar is...what a cutie patootie! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 2:32:00 AM
    Carol,congrats on your win with this beautiful Tetractys.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:50:00 AM
    i second blink an time had passed, big bang surely was a blast... onetime...past

    Date: 2/23/2012 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sometimes though we never think, it happens in a wink, and its gone time...instinct, between the rhymes....
  1. Date: 2/22/2012 11:23:00 PM
    Carol, we poets know you can say a lot with just a few words and you've proven it here. Well done and congrats on making PD's winners' list..............S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:25:00 PM
    CAROL.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Carol.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 2:49:00 PM
    A few words, but collectively, they say a lot.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 12:26:00 PM
    Time seems to move faster than a blink nice expressed poem.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:58:00 AM
    Tempus fugit! What you have written is so true. Peace & Love Matthew Anish