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Blessed Day

Striated gray and deep pink sky Fiery red sun rises As roosters' breath fogs with each crow And floats with surprises As cold surrounds every shrub's leaf An open door sun greets Another day's blessing a gift A soul who now's at peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/23/2013 2:37:00 PM
Great pieces of country life in this Sara, keep well Joe..'
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Date: 12/22/2013 4:51:00 PM
love this beautiful write, Sara
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:31:00 PM
One should always see each day as a blessing. Sara a very beautiful write.
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Date: 12/22/2013 8:29:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs I wish you a Merry Christmas and a very happy new year for 2014.
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:34:00 PM
A poet warms the winter far more than the sun. Thanks for making the cold more bearable. Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/21/2013 6:09:00 PM
Beautiful Sara...everyday is a blessing..expressed beautifully by you here...
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Date: 12/21/2013 3:50:00 PM
- Sara, a joy and delight to read! - Happy Christmas!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2013 3:24:00 PM
tender loving and beautiful Sara great write Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/21/2013 3:09:00 PM
I miss living on the farm especially after reading this lovely piece.
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Date: 12/21/2013 1:13:00 AM
This is a truly enlightening write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this wondrous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, i hope this poem is in refection of good news you have had bestowed upon you! Great Work!!
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Date: 12/20/2013 6:58:00 PM
Country life brings this to you I don't know how city dwellers can stand not having the sky or the fields? happy Holidays! Light & Love
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Date: 12/20/2013 2:39:00 PM
Hi Sara, Carpe diem! Nice write.. Ken
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Date: 12/20/2013 2:25:00 PM
how uplifting is this flowing piece so full of grace, sara... how lovely!.. huggs
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