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I have no idea what compelled me To wonder what my future held The craze about finding my tomorrows To view delivers meld So I decided to decipher my wants To a Highland Seer I went The desire to dispel my haunts Kawasaki 500 sent v Sit down and close your eyes Put your palms on the table Whilst I shuffle your future be And allow the cards to enable . Silence befell my ears Thrilled, he spoke about my past All through my childhood years To be honest, I'm left aghast v He smiled at me as he wrote Requesting I read it later He wished me on my journey This Seer, my future translator Good evening, from the Highlands News As we report on a roadside crash A Kawasaki 500, has left the road An Ambulance in Emergency dash To the Hospital the News Crew followed Having caught up in this saddened case They were told of what was told inside In tear fear fold explained In pain, he whispers into the Paramedics ear Please read this letter to me On the opening of the envelope There were no words to read .
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Date: 10/27/2014 6:30:00 AM
the ending surelt a bomb.. another poem that shows your creativity plus the probability of you writing script. :) have tou tried once?
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James Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 4:38:00 PM
I've never tried writing script Olive. Maybe an avenue in my tomorrows? A surprise ending indeed, James :)
Date: 7/19/2014 2:42:00 AM
Ow my ..You kept me hooked with this story,especially the unexpected ending..It was blank cause there was to be no tomorrow..That crash would mark the last breaths.I'm favouring this gem
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James Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 12:29:00 PM
So glad you liked this piece Charmaine, and your bang on with it's outcome, James :)
Date: 7/18/2014 4:52:00 PM
had to drop by in my other guise to read it again - fabulous 2nd time around james! Hugs Jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 12:13:00 PM
Glad you liked it :)
Date: 7/18/2014 4:47:00 PM
WOW! James this is awesome and I didn't guess the ending at all ! Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/19/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Jan, it's about a rumour that's been doing the rounds for years here in the Highlands, James )
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