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Blackbirds

They flew in bunches so big it’s impossible to describe the enormity of the clouds they formed in otherwise clear sky. They would dance and bounce in unison as they moved from one feeding area to the next. And as they did, you could see the light change in the cloud as they would suddenly shift directions. It was like a wave moving across the group from the lead to the last in flight. How could they change like that, so quickly, all together, and without a single bird loosing its place? Their wings made a whishing sound as they pushed their way through the air and you could hear them chirping as they rhythmically loped and paddled their wings, preserving their position in the multitude.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/15/2010 7:26:00 PM
Amazing creatures .. and awesome to watch them.. special creations of God for us to see.. nice write Ray and thankxxx for the most wonderful information on u and your lovely family on my blog tonight.. all the poets seemed to have loved this idea.. appreciate your input ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/15/2010 7:23:00 PM
Intresting! It is like they are swimming in the air. What a wonderful write...Irma
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