Black Widow

She's got a plan just moved to Florida one week in the hole a forced proposal... "yeah... uh... maybe if I get a job with insurance; we'll get married... then you'll have insurance too!" a bribe the spider web is officially constructed "Charlotte's web" no...we'll name it the Black Widow!

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Glenn Mccrary

Date: 2/1/2012 12:22:00 AM

Simple thoughts all fuse together to paint the intended picture good work. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2012 7:50:00 AM

I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us JSL. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 1/10/2012 7:42:00 AM

not much of a proposal, but I suppose that's the point! she reels him in with logic, then eats him alive :) nice!

Red Fiery

Date: 1/8/2012 11:07:00 PM

the spider web officially constructed...I like the way u weave ur wrds ...so drastic...! cheers again !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2012 11:17:00 AM

hahaha, I love this one. I wish I knew how to be like that black widow. I am a big pushover letting the big bugs walk all over me. Sorry I can only see one poem and move on. I'm at joe's puter and have little time to get back to all my comments. Appreciate you. Andrea

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 1/7/2012 9:25:00 PM

Nice one Joey!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/7/2012 10:10:00 AM

Clever write! I enjoyed the poem a lot JSLambert! Fun write, he's falling into the trap of the widow, the black widow! Poor man!! Awesome Work!!