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Black Saturday

Black Saturday The blackened Hills are now still But the smell remains The sighing and the crying is over But the memory remains Here stands the remnants of a family’s dreams And the question of why remains It has happened before It may happen again Whether to rebuild or not That question remains There’s a hint of green in the valley There is optimism in the streets The indomitable spirit is rising That’s what remains Victoria, Australia 2009 2000 houses lost 173 lives

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Date: 5/2/2014 11:25:00 AM
I like the hinted-at drama in this one. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:21:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Brian
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Date: 10/27/2013 9:56:00 PM
Another great write, we just had similar here, Lac Magantic, the whole of the downtown was burned down.
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Brian Cosgrove
Date: 10/28/2013 8:10:00 PM
Hi Arthur You do have to have had experience of these fires to really appreciate it - Fortunate are those who cannot- There is always life and hope 'I lift my eyes unto the hills whence cometh my help" the ref eludes me Brian
Date: 9/18/2013 7:58:00 PM
Amazing Brian, hi... sad and deep imagery. the smell of smoke is the open, and what remains. I know many held on the rising spirits. thank you for sharing, this tragic day, that ruin the homes, and dreams of many... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/15/2013 6:03:00 PM
Ah, man's indomitable spirit. It is what moves us into another day. Nicely written. Allan
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Brian Cosgrove
Date: 9/16/2013 3:18:00 AM
Hi Allen Thanks for your comments I was afraid the subject matter was a bit far away(Australia) for some Cheer Brian

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