Black Ice Soul

Colorado rain thought sunshine was safe
Behind the trash-bin in plain sight
Time to move asleep again safe again
Waiting for ice new years eve never trust
                                                                 The rain

At midnight

Cactus holds moisture near my bay leaf tree
Metal moon circles the angel nymph
Brocade lamps march into the future

Wind increases as road shine turns slick
Welcome Minnesota winter?

                     12/31/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/12/2013 8:46:00 PM
Metal moon circles the angel nymph .. brilliant. i am so loving this site. wow.
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Date: 1/5/2012 9:04:00 AM
I'm hoping you live in Col. where ther's ome warmth. A big -3 here in Can so I welcome the warmth of your poem.
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Date: 1/2/2012 8:02:00 AM
Are you in CO or MN? I feel sorry for you if you are in Minnesota. Gosh, I grew up with Iowa winters and I hear north of us was worse!! This has great imagery in it. Very interesting poem!
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Date: 1/1/2012 4:06:00 PM
Interesting work..Very descriptive and expressive work..So glad that you spent time with your mother and did something special for her...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/1/2012 1:05:00 PM
Lovely descriptive piece, Jimbo
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