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Black Ice Soul

Colorado rain thought sunshine was safe Behind the trash-bin in plain sight Time to move asleep again safe again Waiting for ice new years eve never trust The rain At midnight Cactus holds moisture near my bay leaf tree Metal moon circles the angel nymph Brocade lamps march into the future Wind increases as road shine turns slick Welcome Minnesota winter? 12/31/11

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Date: 1/12/2013 8:46:00 PM
Metal moon circles the angel nymph .. brilliant. i am so loving this site. wow.
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Date: 1/5/2012 9:04:00 AM
I'm hoping you live in Col. where ther's ome warmth. A big -3 here in Can so I welcome the warmth of your poem.
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Date: 1/2/2012 8:02:00 AM
Are you in CO or MN? I feel sorry for you if you are in Minnesota. Gosh, I grew up with Iowa winters and I hear north of us was worse!! This has great imagery in it. Very interesting poem!
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Date: 1/1/2012 4:06:00 PM
Interesting work..Very descriptive and expressive work..So glad that you spent time with your mother and did something special for her...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/1/2012 1:05:00 PM
Lovely descriptive piece, Jimbo
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