Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


RIMA ANIL.NAIK Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Black which was written by poet RIMA ANIL.NAIK. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by RIMA ANIL.NAIK


+ Fav Poet


Pitter-patter rain drops fall on me,
I hear a  cute little bird chirp on the tree,
The winds pass by and they ruffle my hair,
I enjoy all this seated on my chair.

Is the sky blue or angry and dark?
Will the clouds fight and cause a spark?
Are the children out with paper boats?
Monsoon is here , the weather denotes.

Lush green is grass everywhere,
Children run and raincoats they wear,
I can feel and enjoy this lovely feeling,
Treasures of nature,I feeling like stealing.

How I wish I could see,
Alas! "Blind" is the word for me,
Colourfull world it must be I guess,
But Oh! Black is the only colour with which I am blessed.

Copyright © RIMA ANIL.NAIK

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 4/22/2009 10:53:00 AM
    Rima, This is another touching poem you have posted. I admire your writings. They are sweet and romantic. They flow like a gushing fountain and colourful like a garden. In this poem the blindness of the character is recompensed with the qualities of enhanced perception. He / she is content with the darkness. This gives a very elevated feeling. Thanks for explaining the meaning of Karma. You have also quoted an Urdu Verse. Do you know Urdu? Have you read Urdu Poetry? Regards. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 7:09:00 AM
    FASCINATING...please re-insert as LYRIC. Pick your guitar if you have one and contact a musician; have 10 vocal lessons if necessary unless you can sing from the depth. I wish you all the best.