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Biting mountain air Haiku No 35

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Biting mountain air Haiku No 35

biting mountain air
baby lamb trails on the edge....
mint sauce with dinner

entry for Charles Henderson's strict Haiku 2 competition

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  1. Date: 1/19/2011 6:19:00 AM
    LOL [ps Charlie said NO ...I had to take mine off too, this is a winner to me so, we must take off our ...for now;)] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 4:39:00 PM
    Very expressive and descriptive Haiku..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Good luck in the contest...Your presence at my work encouraged me.Sara

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 7:12:00 AM
    Deirdre, this is magic, I love it. You have the killer last line, poor lamb. I am a veggie lol. Are you Irish? I am from Waterford originally but live in Wicklow and Germany at the moment. Home is Wicklow and Germany is work. I just posted a piece on a new Ireland, a true reflection of life today through the eyes of a beggar I saw. Thanks for your comment.

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 4:06:00 PM
    no win? I fav it!

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 12:44:00 PM
    Happy new year, and best of luck in the contest. Talented and funny ... you are.

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 7:25:00 AM
    Hi and Happy New Year. I can see that dinner. Once again your vision knows no bounds. I read the rules for this-- surprise after the cut-- Bloody hell! You got it in spades. Eamon

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 4:21:00 AM
    What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Deirdre. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 10:26:00 PM
    oh, yes, this is HAIKU!!

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 5:44:00 PM
    A wonderful entry to the contest with this write biting air, Deirdre

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:16:00 AM
    Wonderful haiku .Liked it.

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:14:00 AM
    I like lamb. Cute little haiku.

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:14:00 AM
    Great entry my poet friend....should do well in contest ...always Michael