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Bite Who

I watched a little red ant.
It was running up the wall.
The circus clowns were laughing!
The wallpaper saw.

That red ant did not bite me.
But his distant cousins did.
Made me want to bite my friends.
Haiku Debbie, run!

© April 12, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest:  !!!BITE ME!!! 	 
Sponsored by: Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

P.S.  I love you, Debbie, and your haiku!

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:27:00 PM
    Congrats on your super win, Dane! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 3:47:00 PM
    I love you too Danie!!! I will call as soon as I remember when I am near the phone DUH?? Congrad's Light & love [ will write a sonnet...yes i see it now a sonnet for Debbie...ahh yes YOU WILL write a sonnet..]

    Smith-Johnsen Avatar Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 4/17/2012 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey girl-friend. I am editing photos and tending to some much needed plant care...peach trees struggling. But if your contest is still open, I will write tonight! Love you, much.
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

    Smith-Johnsen Avatar Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 4/17/2012 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol, Is that you in the picture? It is BEAUTIFUL!
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's Contest, Dane Ann! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:22:00 PM
    Now this one is a real hoot, Dane Ann. Just fabulous...Congrats on your great imagination. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM
    Congratulations Dane Ann. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:35:00 PM
    congrats Dane Ann on sweet success with this super entry luv..thankxxx Debbie the Haiku Queen too..

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 11:03:00 AM
    Too much fun! Great tag-bite, Dane Ann! Good luck in the Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:18:00 AM
    HaHa, this was funny!! I looked down and saw a red bump on my arm from the ant bite.. Well done my friend...:JP]

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Well put i enjoyed this....